Nice work! The hair is very well done in this one, don't think I could do hair that way.
The only thing I could find; the eyebrows seem to be a little too low to the eyes, or did you use a reference where the eyebrows really were this low?
I'd like to see a bit more description; what pencils did you use? Did you also smudge it a bit? Did you use a reference?

love
Marleen

EDIT; after seeing the ref I think the eyebrows fit, the right cheek though is in the reference a bit wider. But I like it anyway.

great work

The nose is darker shadowed in the ref too. But good job.

pretty good, mostly agree to what the others said.
her face does look a bit more chubby
and i think you could do a better job on the mouth(no smudging)
but the anatomy and positioning pretty much work, the eyes are a bit off and the muth as well but you can see that only at close range
good job overall

This is beautiful. +10

Bea

This is just one of the breath taking and amazing works...she is just so dreamy, elegant and awesome....A+

Very well done Lee! Of course I remember you!!!!

Nice work Lee!....the hair looks great!....the proportion of the head looks thiner on your version....still good work!
Carlos
(And yes I do remember you Lady Lee...."Beauty of the mountains"
Carlos

Beautiful portrait!

Very well done Echo!!

very nice portrait +10/10

nice drawing